Table of Contents
Introduction
1. Transforming Our “Revision Vision”
2. Revision Nuts and Bolts
3. Deep Reading
4. Revision Toolboxes
5. Revision Toolbox: Structure
6. Revision Toolbox: Words
7. Revision Toolbox: Voice
Epilogue
Appendixes
A. Writers’ Quotes About Revision
B. Revision Survey
C. Peer Conferring Revision Questions
D. Webbing Template
E. Story Mountain Template
F. Essay Template
G. Sequence Template
H. Compare-and-Contrast Template
I. Cause-and-Effect Template
J. Problem-and-Solution Template
K. Description Template
L. Revisions of My Poem “Dragonfly”
M. Seward’s Draft and Lincoln’s Revision