Table of Contents

1. Transforming Our “Revision Vision”
2. Revision Nuts and Bolts
3. Deep Reading
4. Revision Toolboxes
5. Revision Toolbox: Structure
6. Revision Toolbox: Words
7. Revision Toolbox: Voice

A. Writers’ Quotes About Revision
B. Revision Survey
C. Peer Conferring Revision Questions
D. Webbing Template
E. Story Mountain Template
F. Essay Template
G. Sequence Template
H. Compare-and-Contrast Template
I. Cause-and-Effect Template
J. Problem-and-Solution Template
K. Description Template
L. Revisions of My Poem “Dragonfly”
M. Seward’s Draft and Lincoln’s Revision